A childhood classic. Kids today won't know how awesome it is to grow up with this.
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A childhood classic. Kids today won't know how awesome it is to grow up with this.
I nearly choked. so fking gud.
Too stiff, his head doesn't follow a natural arc of motion, wich makes the movement feel disconnected from the body and makes the impact feel too weak, instead of aggressive, wich is how it should be. The smear frame implies confusing motion, not direct motion, so it also doesn't fit the motion it is supposed to imply, which leads to the smear frame feeling out of place and too exaggerated, Other than those details, it's good.
I just can't get enough of all those beans!
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basement nerds learning that no amount of anime in this world can actually teach you how to fight.
Take that your one-eyed drunk
Constructive criticism warning!
The proportions are a tad bit off (no fuss, anatomy's a b*tch) and the spine feels a bit deslocated because of how low the meeting point of the upper and lower parts of her back is or more likely her left hip seems absent (part of bone that "connects" the leg to the chest (side waist)). I'd recommend you to experiment more with waist and belly.
Other than that, it's a really great piece with great coloring and really smooth and pleasant to look at lightling (I'm not particularly good at those). Great composition overall.
(apologies if I came out rude, I just really like to analyze stuff)
8.2158 out of 10
thank you! i always appreciate constructive criticism, and you didnt come up as rude at all
Simplicity is Key
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Aspiring animator
Brazil
Joined on 10/25/21